Looks good to me. Only some very minor inconsistencies. For example:
In sk151574 there is a mix of 900 and 910 through the document. May be stick to either 900 or 910.
In sk153433 :
The list below describes each resolved issue and provides a Take number, in which the fix was included. A resolved issue is included in the Incremental Hotfix starting from the Take number listed in this table (inclusive). In addition, you can find the date when the take was published in the table below.
I think we do not have real "Takes" for SMB. There are no dates in the table as you mention. And there is a mix of Build and Hotfix terms. I think "build" is more like R&D term where Hotfix is what most customers are familiar with. Again, stick to either of those.
But I am personally happy with as it is. Thanx for taking the time to work on this.